Over at
MindsLoveMisery's Menagerie (a title that makes me laugh), Bastet presents the
hay(na)ku with a "shadorma "ending. The latter, new to me, is a
3-5-3-3-7-5 syllable poem. You can go
HERE to see this lovely sequence but here's its shadorma ending:
a shadow
t’was just a shadow
no, not him
nor his tears
just a trick of light and rain
on my window pane.
Thanks ye lovely Bastet and
Menagerie...
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